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This is a song i've written. I'ts quite Seether influenced. The verse has quite monotonous vocals with a fingerpicking riff going on, and the chorus is quite loud and melodic. I'ts still not finished but if some people could give me some feedback that would be great.


Death's March

Life is Dead
Death marches on
Taking souls
Like a wars going strong

Tell me when
This plague will end
Tell me when
My soul will mend

I look across the sea and find a distant shore
I search among the waves for something slightly more
Can you tell me what I'm looking for?
I can't tell myself

All I see
On the ground
Are black coffins
Being taken down

Life is black
All light is gone
Souls are taken
Death marches on

I look across the sea and find a distant shore
I search among the waves for something slightly more
Can you tell me what I'm looking for?
I can't tell myself


REDBIRD