#2
I think it's good. The guitar is simple, but still works. Some nice changes throughout. The melody in the vocals is really nice, and I like it... The singer has a good voice but she can probably sing out with a little more force, if you understand what I mean... Good song.
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#3
well its very quiet, my poor laptops on almost full volume to hear it. It needs a vocal compressor the vocals get distinctively louder at times. The first time u change it up it desnt flow so well (at 1:20) bu the rest it great, im not a huge fan of that ending, i think it could use a lttle work. It sounds like you dont have a huge amount of recording gear, maybe just a mic, thats cool but id love to hear a really profesional version of tis cos frankly it's a classy song, the girls got a good voice, the guitar is nice, id just lke to hear a completed studio like version without the small mistakes and maybe some sot of backing instruments (bass, drums whatever)

seriously cool stuff

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=883215
#5
This reminded of something Avril Lavigne would do with an acoustic original or something of that sorts. The chords are simple but it's a catchy progression. The vocals could use a little bit of work but if you got a good mic setup, it would help you in the long run and improve your singing.

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=886860