#2
The guitar work was good.
Your vocals weren't really up to par, you sounded pretty flat throughout the whole thing.
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#3
You did a pretty good job guitar wise. ^somewhat agree with Feather on vocals.

Who is the original artist?
#4
Guitar is good. I think you did the vocals poorly on this song but you have a good voice. You sound bored lol

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#5
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You did a pretty good job guitar wise. ^somewhat agree with Feather on vocals.

Who is the original artist?

Original artist is death cab for cutie.

And I agree with the others, guitar playing was decent but vocals could use some work.
#6
Thank you people. I was very aggravated when i made this recording because i was tired and making stupid mistakes (as you probably heard). I may have another go later. domani, domani....
#8
not sure which one samick was talking about.. I tried again to sound not so bored. it is now up there at my profile under take 2.
#9
It sounds a bit better vocal wise, but I suggest working on your vocal range.
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#10
chill a bit on the guitar work. i usually finger strum it to get a softer tone. not bad overall, though
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#11
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It sounds a bit better vocal wise, but I suggest working on your vocal range.


haha, i really am not a singer at all, i just wish i could. How do i go about working on that and becoming 'better'?
#12
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haha, i really am not a singer at all, i just wish i could. How do i go about working on that and becoming 'better'?


You could take lessons and they will help you control your voice and have the wider range.
I'm not a singer either, haha.
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