#1
A pretty short oriental sounding piece I wrote. The genre is pretty hard to define, you can try to figure that out yourself. Nothing more to say really...crit for crit, etc.
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shanghai.zip
Last edited by Pingis_Or_Death at Jun 17, 2008,
#2
Hmm...

The song was very basic, very basic structure. I liked all the riffs, prolly the chorus was the best, a short 8 bar solo would do wonders for this song. No transition bars or anything, just basicness. Not to say that it's bad, right now you have the outline for a great song, but at the current stage it's just a good song.


(My newest one is the bottom one in my sig, called PD and DM if you wanna crit it)
Last edited by bloodshed344 at Jun 17, 2008,
#3
I agree with bloodshed. you've got a great start, and the riffs are all pretty sweet, but it needs more. I felt like it should be a bit faster though. and I also agree that a short solo would be awesome. and with all the repeats you're doing, I feel like you could alter the riffs just a bit each time which would IMO make it twice as interesting. I really liked the outro though. sweet stuff.

could you crit mine?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=885137
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