#1
Hey guys. Here's another song I just did. It's like an acoustic ballad type thing. I put some strings in there to help set the mood, and improvised a guitar solo over it. For some reason, during the solo it clips a little bit...not too much but it's still there. I have no idea how to fix it, I tried everything...Anyways, any crits are appreciated

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#2
Nice, very dark. I like the background keys. I was kinda expecting it to drop into a nice chugging riff after the first chorus, but I like what you did. The solo kinda came out of nowhere though. It was still pretty good though. I give it a 7/10

crit?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=877442

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=886600

http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=888584