#1
My band's name is Lost the Lead. I wanted to get feedback on the song "Conceit." This isn't going to be the final product. It's just a jam we hit the record button on, and it just kind of fell into a song we've been working on. I think we have a pretty original sound, and I hope you dig it.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=845526&content=music

Comments or concerns?

C4C...
Last edited by ZigZag0420 at Jun 18, 2008,
#2
hey there thanks for the crit. that's actually kinda funny that you gave my drummer a D- cuz it's me haha. i suck real hard at the drums but i just wanted to have some drums on there. anything in particular about the guitar that u wanna point out to me?

anyways, i'm listening to your song. pretty cool. neat rythym you got going. i like the way the guitar works with the drums. your drummer is way better than mine. i really like the singing on here, very unique. very cool. the end of course is pretty cool. i don't really have much negative to say about the song, other than well i didn't come up with it haha. nice job though.
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#3
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hey there thanks for the crit. that's actually kinda funny that you gave my drummer a D- cuz it's me haha. i suck real hard at the drums but i just wanted to have some drums on there. anything in particular about the guitar that u wanna point out to me?

anyways, i'm listening to your song. pretty cool. neat rythym you got going. i like the way the guitar works with the drums. your drummer is way better than mine. i really like the singing on here, very unique. very cool. the end of course is pretty cool. i don't really have much negative to say about the song, other than well i didn't come up with it haha. nice job though.


Is it irony that I'm the drummer for my band?

Glad you like the song. I'll leave deeper comments in your thread, about your song.

Anybody else want to crit mine? I'll do the same for yours...
#6
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Sorry, i would if i could there zigzag but i cant play soundclick on my pc.



All good. Sorry about making our site seem like dogsh!t. Keep on jammin' along. See ya.
#7
giving the song a listen now. There's some cool rhythms going on. Nice vocals. I like the keyboards in this song. The recording quality could use some work, but its not a huge issue since this is just a jam of the song. The drumming is very good, but maybe a bit overboard in some parts, like too many fills. Check your guitar's tuning on the last solo, some of the notes sounded a bit off.

But overall nice job! Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=890751
#8
Quote by RobinTrower12
giving the song a listen now. There's some cool rhythms going on. Nice vocals. I like the keyboards in this song. The recording quality could use some work, but its not a huge issue since this is just a jam of the song. The drumming is very good, but maybe a bit overboard in some parts, like too many fills. Check your guitar's tuning on the last solo, some of the notes sounded a bit off.

But overall nice job! Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=890751


I'm actually the drummer in my band, and I have to say, that criticism is pretty spot on. A tad too many fills, and I didn't really change the kinds of fills, either, and it may have become a bit monotonous. I'm pretty happy with it, and just hope to get more C4C's... (hint hint)
#9
I actually liked the drums a lot. The guitar still needs a little work imo, it sounds very bland atm. The vocals were decent, but he could sing a little more powerful.

Overall: 7/10
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