#1
I wrote this song yesterday midnight...I was sleepy and I got an idea to write a new song..So I just wrote it down...The lyrics may seem childish to you..but i like it very much coz it reflects the relationship between me and my ex-gf directly..So how ya guyz think?
Attachments:
circles.zip
#3
it sounded good and everything blended well. however, it could use a lot more. lyrics did bother me. IMO, you could say the exact same thing in a much less cliche way, don't you agree? but everything went pretty well. on the parts when it says "miss you" it seemed that instead of going E-B-E-B on the vocal line, you should go E-B-E-F# cause going back down to the B didn't seem right to me...

otherwise, although simple I did really like this. good job
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...