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k so this girl in my class wrote this song and i helped a little bit and everybody loves it, blah blah blah. cept theres like NO flow imo. i need some help fixing this so i can actually put a guitar part to it
genreish: slower rock?

what can i say, i'm moving on and it so hard to do.
i stare in the mirror and all i see is you
i lay awake at night and dream of what could have been,
but its no good because.....

i have tears running down my face
and i dont wanna feel like this anymore.
you were my best friend, you broke my heart,
did you even really care?..........I'm moving on....

I'm sitting in my bed talking to you late at night, i really tried.
you were someone i could talk to and now your gone!

i have tears running down my face
and i dont wanna feel like this anymore.
you were my best friend, you broke my heart,
did you even really care?..........I'm moving on....

It felt like my heart was getting ripped out from inside of me.
you shut me out of your life, why did i even try!
you obviously didnt want me in your life anymore.
And now i just need to ignore....

These tears running down my face that are drying up now...
Its not so hard anymore! You're not my best friend,
i cant even talk to you now, and you didnt even care that my heart was broken in two! Thats why i'm moving on.............IM MOVING ON.....
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Quote by TobyFellrunners
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Read the rules, regarding post limits of songs, and also thread titles, you've broken the rule on both of them with this thread.


where would i find that at.