hey guys have a listen 2 my stairway 2 heaven and let me know what you think
My Gear

Epiphone Les Paul Special II
ESP KH-202 with OFR
Hobner Acoustic
BOSS OS-2 Overdrive/Distortion pedal
Dunlop GCB95 Crybaby Wah Pedal
Laney P20 20-Watt 1x8 Amplifier
you didnt play all the parts and the parts you did play you dont have all the correct notes to. your timing was way off. use a metronome and play at a consistent speed. you sped up certain parts and then slowed back down and sped up again.
Quote by forsaknazrael
You should probably mug John Frusciante or Ritchie Blackmore. They're small guys, we could take 'em.

Just look out for that other guy in the Red Hot Chili Peppers, Will Farrel. He's a tall mofo, got a long reach.

Quote by Invader Jim
I give up.

too slow in the beginnging, speeding up then. sloppy. sounds like you tried to get over with it...