#1
during the each verse is picking and then it goes into strumming during the chorus and pre-chorus. the outro is the same picking as the verse. crit for crit.


(verse one)
Hold me close
To you
Never let me fall away
Never leave me hear to stay alone
So hold me close
So hold me close
So hold me close
To you

(pre-chorus)
Cause we will be known
Just let me find the way
You will never be alone
Cause with me you are safe

(chorus)
Ever since I saw you
the most beautiful face
I couldn’t change my mind
I knew it was fate
they said it wouldn’t happen
but oh I knew it would
For this is my life
and you must be my world

(instrumental bridge)

(verse two)
Hold me close
To you
Never let me fade away
Never leave me in your memories.
So hold me close
So hold me close
So hold me close
To you

(pre-chorus instrumentals)

(chorus)
Ever since I saw you
the most beautiful face
I couldn’t change my mind
I knew it was fate
they said it wouldn’t happen
but oh I knew it would
For this is my life
and you must be my world

(same instrumental as bridge)

(outro instrumentals)
Last edited by jesse thompson at Jun 19, 2008,
#2
I like this song, it's pretty easy to imagine being sung. I don't think there's anything stand out about it. Nothing that is like "Wow, this is quotable". That being said, I'm curious to how you would personally sing it to make it that much more original. Would you overlap the "So close"?, or harmonize it? Or just sing it without any add-on effects? Overall, enjoyable piece.