#1
Pretty simple acoustic song. The chords are G, Em, Am, D. Played with mostly quarter notes until the chorus where it has a different strum pattern.

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I pray you're well, I pray you'll see
Regrets are mistakes, you'll never be,
I'm looking forward to the back of your mind
Where I lie in pieces, like a lost pick-up line
I see you see me, but we both pretend not,
'cause you've moved on, I lost my shot,
But my heart is cold, froze in this spot,
Heavy with flashbacks, cos you're all I got...

I will cherish those memories,
so you can forget me, so easily...
I will walk with your name, engraved in my thoughts,
January, January,
Where have you gone, my bitter ghost
I will scream out your name, just to hear the echo,
I will scream out your name to see if angels reply,
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If you're lost you can find me, but why would you search,
I'm sure I will love, I'm sure I will live,
But somedays, I pray with nothing to give,
Somedays I need you, even though you are gone,
For the sake of us both, don't repeat this song
To be loved one more time, I would go back to that month
A cold winter night, simply warmed by your touch
When spoke louder, by loving so much
January... I miss you, you make it hard to move
Tears rip this reflection, I still see you.

I will cherish those memories,
so you can forget, so easily...
I will walk with your name, engraved in my thoughts,
January, January,
Where have you gone, my bitter ghost
I will scream out your name, just to hear the echo,
I will scream out your name to see if angels reply

#2
I think it's a decent song. Definately needs more rhyme in the chords bit. For example, the last two lines should rhyme I think.
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#3
I have a feeling you listen to sum41? I see some variations of little catches of there lyrics like "I'm looking foward to the back of your mind" which is kind of close to "Somewhere ahead is the back of the mind" from 'Summer'
All in all, good song though, I like the chorus.
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#4
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I have a feeling you listen to sum41? I see some variations of little catches of there lyrics like "I'm looking foward to the back of your mind" which is kind of close to "Somewhere ahead is the back of the mind" from 'Summer'
All in all, good song though, I like the chorus.



I listen to some sum 41, although honestly, not enough to say that they had any role in this song. I think the only songs from them that I really really appreciate are "With You" and "Pieces". But I may have to listen to Summer now...

As for the last two lines rhyming, do you think I should add another bar to make it end on a rhyme, or do you think I should change those lines up?

Thanks for the feed. Will do my best to rtf.