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CHECK MY PROFILE FOR THE SONG

I'm trying to make songs similar to Benny Bennasi. I know this song I made is not the best, but I'm getting better. It took forever just to figure out how to use FL Studio.

I need some critisizim. Don't say anything like "U suck" or "Techno is Stupid".

After I get some of y'alls opionions im going to change it according to what y'all said.


Give me a 1-10

10 Being Perfect.
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Last edited by ForrestS at Jun 19, 2008,
#6
Sorry man, it hurts my ears... It needs total revampage, imho.
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#7
I would think u should add more stuff u just have one thing over and over
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#8



Whatever...


I posted the same thing on another forum, maybe I'll get more serous answers.
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#9
In the beginning, the over-beat is strong, but when the back beat kicks in, it dims. I don't like that part.

Also, maybe that could be the intro to the song, and then about 30 seconds in, some eighth notes could come in behind that. High-pitched eighth notes of some sort. It's a little slow, it would be better with a faster tempo.

These are opinions, not orders, BTW. Just ideas.
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#11
Quote by Ibanez69
I would think u should add more stuff u just have one thing over and over


THANKS!!

I'll do that!
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#13
... is this serious? Cause that was... wow...
I can honestly say I have really been far even as decided to use even go want to do look more like.


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#14
Quote by dudetheman
In the beginning, the over-beat is strong, but when the back beat kicks in, it dims. I don't like that part.

Also, maybe that could be the intro to the song, and then about 30 seconds in, some eighth notes could come in behind that. High-pitched eighth notes of some sort. It's a little slow, it would be better with a faster tempo.

These are opinions, not orders, BTW. Just ideas.



Thank you, thats what I was looking 4.
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#15
If someone says its bad dont get pissed at them, you asked for opinions. You should be glad people are saying their opinions not what you want to hear.
#16
It sounds ok, I think it could use a strong lead line though, unless you want it to be ambient, then it needs pads, also try to make it a little less repetitive. also this belongs in riffs and recordings, you won't get any "techno sucks" crap in there and people are generally really helpful, just remember not to take negative feedback as an insult.

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#17
It's just a bass line, and it's only 30 seconds. What is it a remix of?

My bad there's a pad aswell.
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#18
Well now that you have the bass line, put some stuff over it and maybe add a gated track in there as well.
#19
Quote by MedicreDemon
It's just a bass line, and it's only 30 seconds. What is it a remix of?


Its Remix 4 wich = Version 4
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#20
Quote by ForrestS
Its Remix 4 wich = Version 4


oh.
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You sell a dream you create
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#24
1/10

sorry, i just didnt like it. and im a huge fan of techno.
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#25
Quote by slappymoe66
If someone says its bad dont get pissed at them, you asked for opinions. You should be glad people are saying their opinions not what you want to hear.



I'm happy with every answer pretty much. I just don't like those answers like "Techno is Stupid"
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#27
Keep ****ing about with fl studio man, you'll get better, also have a look at reason 4, it's better in my oppinion. I can't give you a score out of 10 because it was only 30 seconds long

Why only a 30 second preview?
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#29
Quote by shrdtilyourdead
it sounds kinda bad but good for your first song


you should send me a copy f FL Studios



Just torrent it you lazy bastard.
Soon you will sit on the bench
of those who deny I have my soul
You sell a dream you create
Condemned by what you condemned before
Smooth are the words you sing down and high
Underground is your joy your laws
#31
Quote by faultyy
Keep ****ing about with fl studio man, you'll get better, also have a look at reason 4, it's better in my oppinion. I can't give you a score out of 10 because it was only 30 seconds long

Why only a 30 second preview?



Whoa? Your getting a 30 Preview??? I dident know that! Hang On
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#32
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i couldnt find a good copy



I got mine off of bearshare.
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#33
The song is even shorter now.
Soon you will sit on the bench
of those who deny I have my soul
You sell a dream you create
Condemned by what you condemned before
Smooth are the words you sing down and high
Underground is your joy your laws
#35
Quote by ForrestS
WHAT?



Yeah that whole quicktime bar probably goes for about 3 seconds.

It's not even your sogn I don't think, just an ad.

Yeah, it's an ad lol.
Soon you will sit on the bench
of those who deny I have my soul
You sell a dream you create
Condemned by what you condemned before
Smooth are the words you sing down and high
Underground is your joy your laws
#36
Quote by MedicreDemon
Yeah that whole quicktime bar probably goes for about 3 seconds.



Why is u using quicktime.

I just used it to see if was working and it was.
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#38
Quote by ForrestS
Why is u using quicktime.

I just used it to see if was working and it was.



It opens a new screen in firfox then quicktime loads and it just plays an ad. Just export the file as an mp3 and upload to sendspace or something and I'll listen again.
(I make psytrance btw with FL)
Soon you will sit on the bench
of those who deny I have my soul
You sell a dream you create
Condemned by what you condemned before
Smooth are the words you sing down and high
Underground is your joy your laws
#39
Quote by MedicreDemon
It opens a new screen in firfox then quicktime loads and it just plays an ad. Just export the file as an mp3 and upload to sendspace or something and I'll listen again.
(I make psytrance btw with FL)



Really???!!! Cool!!!


When I click it shows a Open and Save thing. I just hit open and it opened it in Windows Media Player.

I'm gonna add it to my profile. Maybe that will fix the problem.


Add me as a friend too, scence you use FL Studio.
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#40
do you have the full version?
i only have the trial, so i cant save so...
yeah me and my friend also made a few songs, theyre pretty crap but i put em on myspace...
www.myspace.com/djbr00tz

and that was good as for a first attempt...by good i mean better than mine
i hate techno, me and my friend only made it coz we were bored and its pretty fun
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