#1
Your words screaming out in vain
And I’m standing around the corner with a big bloodstain.
The rain soaking your shirt, soaking your hair,
I stand there without the slightest care.

I’ve been lurking these streets for weeks, waiting for the perfect prey.
My soul, my heart, all have grown cold, my sense of morality slipping away.
Waiting for you, here you come around the corner.
You watch me like I’m some foreigner.

Grinning, I follow you slowly, just watching your stride.
Once I’m done with you, you’ll have no pride.
All that prada on your neck won’t matter.
Your intestines will look like cake batter.

Dragging you into the alleyway I smile with satisfaction.
It’s time for a bit of what I call a transaction.
There’s no point in screaming, you’re going to die.
Throwing you to the ground, cracking your rips with a huge sigh.

Pulling the gun out of my pocket,
I point it at you and **** it.
One, two, three, I laugh and pull the trigger.
This is what you get, you fucking gold digger.

Disemboweling you, pulling your intestines out.
I can’t help but hear satisfaction, so I shout.
Hatred fills my veins,
Now there’s one more stain.

Standing over the corpse, I light up a brand new blunt.
One last, just one last stunt.
Laughing, I light your carcass on fire
When I finally start to perspire.


I'm not sure, I kind of like it.
It's very hate filled though.
:/
You're not brutal.


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#2
Brutally awesome man. This should be a death metal song.
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#3
Hmm...so, you wrote this? Very hate-filled. Um...not sure wat else to say. Most songs that are filled don't shock me; yours did. I listen to Heavy Metal. I should be used to this. Damn. :|
#4
Quote by M<rockqer>M
Brutally awesome man. This should be a death metal song.


Thanks.
I'm actually trying to start a grindcore band, and I thought this was fitting.


Quote by Metallist65
Hmm...so, you wrote this? Very hate-filled. Um...not sure wat else to say. Most songs that are filled don't shock me; yours did. I listen to Heavy Metal. I should be used to this. Damn. :|


Thanks, that's what I aimed for.
And yes, I wrote this.
It took about 15 minutes because I wanted to make it rhyme.
You're not brutal.


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#5
it'd be good as a hardcore type song
when i read that all i could think of was bring me the horizon