I'm trying to write something on acoustic, it's in my profile as "Song Help". I basically just don't know where to go from there. It's in the key of E for those that can't pick that up by listening.
Feed your mind.
Well, Take chord version of the notes you're are hitting simultaneously. The song songs VERY thin right now, especially the the lil riff between the simultaneous notes.
Have a keyboard? Try putting the notes with a synth (if you can figure out the notes on keyboard) like guitarfreak said.