#1
She's a punk rock princess wtih a pretty face
She's got her feet on the ground but her heads in space

As soon as I met her, thats when I knew
Yeah I had some thoughts that I best not tell you

And there we were, with nothing but time
A hormone overload and a cheap bottle of wine

Well the buzz wears off and reality strikes
Internal conflict, an internal strife

Gotta figure out what I'm gonna do
Theres one little thing I forgot to tell you


She's got a boyfriend, and I admit I knew
but a guys gotta do what a guys gotta do

Hey now, what can you do
When a pretty little girls got her hands on you

you tell me, what would you do
punk rock princess all over you


Well I'll admit, when things settled down
I felt kinda guilty that we messed around

But sometimes it gets the best of you
when that punk rock princess has her hands on you
#4
It's definitely a fun song. I think that you should try not to rhyme 'do' and 'you' so much, other than that I don't have too many complaints.

It reminds me of a David Bowie song, I forget what it's called though.
#5
I like the rhyming of it all, and the wording is excellent! Very fun song
#6
I wrote it for a 'punk' band I'm in. I wanted to show them that you can have fun with lyrics, and I think the rhymes add to it. I figured that title has most likely been used before but I thought it fit best. Thanks for the honest feedback.

Also, the guitar part adds a lot to it, I'm going to record a demo for the lead singer of the band later today but I'm going to attempt vocals, its not gonna be pretty but I can post it to give you guys a better idea if you promise not to be too harsh on my singing
#8
Ya, I couldnt seem to think of a chorus. Any Ideas?


Edit: when I wrote it I intended for that first couplet to be repeated throughout but it didnt work
#9
She's a punk rock princess wtih a pretty face
She's got her feet on the ground but her heads in space

As soon as I met her, thats when I knew
Yeah I had some thoughts that I best not tell you

And there we were, with nothing but time
A hormone overload and a cheap bottle of wine

Well the buzz wears off and reality strikes
Internal conflict, an internal strife

Gotta figure out what I'm gonna do
Theres one little thing I forgot to tell you


She's got a boyfriend, and I admit I knew
but a guys gotta do what a guys gotta do

Hey now, what can you do
When a pretty little girls got her hands on you

you tell me, what would you do
punk rock princess all over you


She's a punk rock princess wtih a pretty face
She's got her feet on the ground but her heads in space

As soon as I met her, thats when I knew
Yeah I had some thoughts that I best not tell you


Well I'll admit, when things settled down
I felt kinda guilty that we messed around

But sometimes it gets the best of you
when that punk rock princess has her hands on you


Edit: The music is in my profile, I tried to add lyrics but decided not to because I seriously CANNOT sing...but at least I admit it
Last edited by livrockdie at Jun 22, 2008,
#10
Quote by NxVx89
NICE! i try not to cut lunches but sometimes its too hard



I'm sorry but how does that relate to the song?