#1
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This is my short little riff that sounds like a halfway decent intro to a song.

Anyway, the point of me posting this here is because I completely trust the UG community to give me feedback or suggestions that would help make this better. Any backing chords to this riff to make it sound like metal-ish would be nice too.
Something better than E bar chord, G bar chord, A Bar Chord, G

A fancy little backing rhythm and any additions are welcome

Thank you UG,

Ochazuke

P.S. Don't be too mean

( STFU NOOB U R TEH SUX = A No-no )

P.P.S. What key is this in, E?
Last edited by Ochazuke at Jun 22, 2008,
#2
i tried it, i like it, but not my cup of tea, good job though
Gear

Standard Epiphone LP W/Dimarzio Super 2's
1973 Ampeg VT-22

Fulltone Clyde
Ernie Ball VP Jr
Boss tu-2
Boss sd-1
Ehx Little Big Muff
Fulltone Ultimate Octave
Boss eq-7
Ehx Memory Man
Digitech Delay X-series
Ehx Holy Grail
#4
a major works
Gear

Standard Epiphone LP W/Dimarzio Super 2's
1973 Ampeg VT-22

Fulltone Clyde
Ernie Ball VP Jr
Boss tu-2
Boss sd-1
Ehx Little Big Muff
Fulltone Ultimate Octave
Boss eq-7
Ehx Memory Man
Digitech Delay X-series
Ehx Holy Grail
#5
a not A major works yes E
Gear

Standard Epiphone LP W/Dimarzio Super 2's
1973 Ampeg VT-22

Fulltone Clyde
Ernie Ball VP Jr
Boss tu-2
Boss sd-1
Ehx Little Big Muff
Fulltone Ultimate Octave
Boss eq-7
Ehx Memory Man
Digitech Delay X-series
Ehx Holy Grail
#6
Thanks , this is the first riff I've ever written. It sounds interesting, kind of depressing though >.<;