#1
first piece i ever really wrote...did a lot of editing. i like the idea behind this too much to leave in a rough draft basically.

Baby you walked away today,
I didn’t want you anyway
You took everything I had owned
And I’m happy that you left
I despised the way you laughed,
The way you shook your hips,
The dimples right above your ass

I hate everything you do
But the way you make me feel is so unreal
I have the deepest hatred for you
I love you beyond anything else I feel
I have a case of loving hate

You lifted me above the clouds
But you dropped me back down to earth
I still hate every move you make
I can’t get past the cold spot
Where you’d lay the past few years
The day you left I had a smirk
But I spent that night in tears

I hate everything you do
But the way you make me feel is so unreal
Baby, I have the deepest hatred for you
Yet I love you beyond anything else I feel
I have a case of loving hate

Girl I’m living the life right now
It’s been a month since you left me
I’m better that you’re away

Who am I trying to fool?

I need you more than anything
Living without you is like
Living without a breath
I miss everything you do

Yet, I hate everything you do
But the way you make me feel is so unreal
I have the deepest hatred for you
I love you beyond anything else I feel
I guess I have the loving hate
#2
I think you could condense this a lot, its got some good ideas but they're too hidden by repeating the bad ones IMO.

I dunno if you got caught up in the emotion;

I need you more than anything
Living without you is like
Living without a breath
I miss everything you do

But no song needs that.
Once We Were Anarchists