#1
Well two things to keep in mind...

1. i can't sing for ****, even though its not serious, it still isnt that good

2. this was my first time trying to play in e flat major and im not too familiar with some of the scales yet

just constructive criticism would be appreciated
anything to get better
#2
you might want to tell people where the song is, because not everyone one would know where to look.

but i found it, and its not bad.. keep up the good work
sex, drugs, and rock and roll have turned into aids, needles, and techno..
#4
Pretty damn funny man. I would crack the hell up to watch one of my friends to perform chocolate rain like that in front of me.
HEEEEEEEEYYYYYYY YOUUUU GUYYYYYYSSSS