#1
this is a song i wrote on acoustic, i like it, but a lot of my lyrics are ****, so i thought i'd take other people's view.


i'm so confused
when i smile, the first thing i think of is you
but what does that mean?
is this real, or is this my wildest dream?
it's taking me a while to figure out what to do
it's taken me some time to work out what you mean

[chorus]
the glasses in our hands
will mark the fullness of our lives
it should come as no surprise that the glass is full
but i'm scared of how easy it is to drink
and i'm scared of how little that means to me
and my friends are already half way through
how far are you?


when i look into my past
can't help but be happy, how long will that last?
i guess we'll soon see
just how much all that meant to me
it's going to take some time to figure out what to do
it's going to take some time to figure out what it means to me

[bridge]
choking, aching, hesitating
and never knowing
innocent and unsuspecting
#2
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#4
Whatever you still posted it eh?

It is a bit immature and whiney you know, but its done in a really respectful? way, its not too over the top and it really works for the type of song its meant to be. Sure its no Bright Eyes but its thoughtful if simple, nice work!
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