Hello everyone, I'm a new member here on the UG forums. Basically I come to you all with a request that you listen to this piece I'm working on and critique it for me. What I'm wanting to know is if the progression of the song works, or if it doesn't. I've been screwing around on guitar for about 3 and a half years, I have okay technical ability but my goal is to get my songwriting capabilities up to par. I know almost no theory.

Well, here's the link to the song. It's not long. Any feedback would be highly appreciated. Thanks!