I'm working on the lyrics for this but for now i could just use some critique on the structure. I have been told to turn down the cymbal (you'll hear it) and i have agreed with that. Anything else would be a big help. This is my first forum post, i didn't know the forums did stuff like this. XD

Also, any title ideas would be helpful, it's called blank canvas right now just because lyrically it is.

Last edited by Zombiereagan at Jun 24, 2008,
I really like it. It's a cool little song, and I like the little solo's or when the guitar broke off from the main riff for a little. I think you should add more of those. I don't see an apparent structure, but I wasn't exactly looking for one.

And I'd love to hear it when the lyrics are done. Let me know when their finished.