#1
I'm working on the lyrics for this but for now i could just use some critique on the structure. I have been told to turn down the cymbal (you'll hear it) and i have agreed with that. Anything else would be a big help. This is my first forum post, i didn't know the forums did stuff like this. XD


Also, any title ideas would be helpful, it's called blank canvas right now just because lyrically it is.

http://www.virb.com/housewithoutfurniture
Last edited by Zombiereagan at Jun 24, 2008,
#2
I really like it. It's a cool little song, and I like the little solo's or when the guitar broke off from the main riff for a little. I think you should add more of those. I don't see an apparent structure, but I wasn't exactly looking for one.

And I'd love to hear it when the lyrics are done. Let me know when their finished.