#1
my 4th song and i think i'm improving
crit4crit
hope u like it

Do you remember when we met?
at the middle school dance
and a week later
we were holding hands
back then that was the big time

Do you remember those shows we watched?
with a mom a dad and two kids
they were so perfect but its not like that
i must have missed the message a the bottom of the screen that said
"results not typical"

now we're grown up and we're just like them
a mom a dad and we've got two kids
but its not so perfect is it?
our results are typical

wouldn't it be better if we were more like them
the worst that happened was our kids friends were smoking
but our kids are the friends
getting the perfect kids into trouble
this is typical

well isn't that how it goes?
as they get older they'll grow
and the world will get over us
and we'll get over the world
and the end of us will come
'cuz that's just typical

Do you remember those shows we watched?
with a mom a dad and two kids
they were so perfect but its not like that
i must have missed the message a the bottom of the screen that said
"results not typical"

"results not typical"
#4
I like this alot actualy, very decent song.
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Who.

Cares.
#5
pretty good.
it is hard to crit, i agree.
i like the way set it.
that way it was supposed to be a certain way.
if you could add more that would be cool