#1
hey this is my version of under the bridge by RHCP
my version, not a copy of the original...
crit pls.

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#2
its good but you need to work on your timing for parts, the intro and chorus for example
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#3
the intro is not right at all. i know its "your version" but that is very different, you cant change it so much and say its still the same thing, its evident that you couldnt play the actual things. Thats ok, but in that case then dont make a video and post it.
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sorry mate, but I really don't like it. feels like you just raped an amazing song
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#5
Oh and (not to be nit-picking) the solo for we will rock you is NOT all downstrokes. if you play it with every other one going up it will sound exceptionally better.

Sorry, that was just constructive criticism. Off subjects, but maybe itll help
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the intro is not right at all. i know its "your version" but that is very different, you cant change it so much and say its still the same thing, its evident that you couldnt play the actual things. Thats ok, but in that case then dont make a video and post it.

i can play the actual thing.
but i was using a capo, so no original one.

however, thanks for the crit on we will rock you i videotaped it a long time ago and just posted recently i should redo it.
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i can play the actual thing.
but i was using a capo, so no original one.

however, thanks for the crit on we will rock you i videotaped it a long time ago and just posted recently i should redo it.


i'm assuming you were using a capo because that makes the intro a lot easier
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#9
the intro and main verse sounded really choppy. im typing this as i listen and it actually sounds all kind of choppy. if you really intend on keeping your own version, you might want to work on it lol

it really wasn't that bad because at least you tried putting your own spin on the cover. at least now you know what people think and what you have to work on

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i'm assuming you were using a capo because that makes the intro a lot easier

thats yes but i switched a few notes from the original,
the original isn't that hard to play...
just becuase i felt like changing sme parts doesn't mean i can't play the original.
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#11
hey overall good approach
just a few things: your timing's a bit off at various points, especially during the intro
you also seem to speed up too much and start playing too hard during the chorus
also next time you try playing it, try adding some of the little fills that john throws in. you don't have to copy them, but the little trills he has really adds to the song.
nice effort though.

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#12
at least it was better then that **** cover by All Saints.
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#13
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hey overall good approach
just a few things: your timing's a bit off at various points, especially during the intro
you also seem to speed up too much and start playing too hard during the chorus
also next time you try playing it, try adding some of the little fills that john throws in. you don't have to copy them, but the little trills he has really adds to the song.
nice effort though.

mind critting mine?
http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=891195

sounds great, ill use a metronome next time.
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