#1
Note: The first few lines in the chorus is something that one of my friends sent me, I'm not sure if they made it up or anything, so if it's from anywhere please let me know.

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Verse 1:

Where do I keep all these emotions bottled up inside of me?
How do I escape these demons haunting my day?
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Chorus:

Sick of crying,
Tired of trying,
I might be smiling,
But outside I'm dying.
Life is fading,
I'm just evading,
The end that awaits,
It's coming too soon.
I cannot continue,
It's draining me.
I think my time has come,
Outside I'm dead.

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Verse 2:

I'm trying to clear this haze that's grasping me.
It won't let me go.
Helpless, it clouds my mind again.

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Chorus:

Sick of crying,
Tired of trying,
I might be smiling,
But outside I'm dying.
Life is fading,
I'm just evading,
The end that awaits,
It's coming too soon.
I cannot continue,
It's draining me.
I think my time has come,
Outside I'm dead.

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Chorus:

Sick of crying,
Tired of trying,
I might be smiling,
But outside I'm dying.
Life is fading,
I'm just evading,
The end that awaits,
It's coming too soon.
I cannot continue,
It's draining me.
I think my time has come,
Outside I'm dead.

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Outro:

Outside... I'm dead.
Outside... I'm dead.
Outside... I'm dead.
Dead!

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Thanks for reading! Let me know what you think
Last edited by Static The Band at Jun 25, 2008,
#2
To me it is a little confusing. Throughout the song you talk about emotions etc which are all inside. Then you say you are smiling but outside your dead. It seems like "inside" would fit better. Am I missing something?
#4
The "Outside I'm dead" bit is the fact that there's no point trying anymore, and when you don't even try, you look dead on the outside.