#1
Here's a rap I wrote mostly with the aim to improve my rhyming/flow in writing. The content isn't serious or anything, so just enjoy.

Some playas use ice to entice,
But I prefer to use Old Spice and Bacardi.
On those underage girls that rock my world,
I just want to give them a chance to party.

Cruisin' downtown checkin' out the prospects
Looking for the kinda girls who don't push charges
I got a smooth ride that's completely paid
Pick-up truck with a bed, (in case I ever get laid)
So hop in for a ride baby, don't be afraid
You must be so tired, from running all day
through my mind, (I got a million lines)
Designed to make the ladies melt like butter
And it also doesn't hurt when you pick chicks from the gutter
Who just like me don't discriminate.
White, black, young, old, why the hate?
Cause all I wanna do is fornicate,
Give the world some love in a time when there ain't
None, just pain to be had like an asshole cop
with his gun, and his badge in my face.

So if you're interested, don't be hesitant,
But I won't accept just any old applicant
First I'll have to see some photo I.D
And if you've got a license you're too old for me.
Unless you're a beginner cause then we got a winner
Let's get down and dirty after candlelit dinner
I'm not a creep, yeah I believe in romancin'
But I can't get a break cause of guys like Chris Hansen
Making true love seem like a crime, and handing out jailtime
Lock a playa up like a dog in a cage
I like all women, I just prefer underage.
Last edited by rush4life at Jun 26, 2008,
#3
all i gotta say about underage girls... is you should treat them like square roots, if their under 16.. do them in your head
#4
Quote by pepsi1187
all i gotta say about underage girls... is you should treat them like square roots, if their under 16.. do them in your head



DUDE! amaizing quote
#6
Kind of strange... I think all of the three verses are pretty good, but the last verse is rhymed the best and flows really good.
#8
best song i ever heard about underage girls
Reaching for the sun
one may forget
the feet which
ground him
#10
Idiotic topics like this is why no one respects rap music in the first place.

It was the only task I would undertake...

I P R O G
...to reap the harvest that was mine


- [ P R O G - H E A D ? ] -
#12
Discriminate.
There's only one thing we can do to thwart the plot of these albino shape-shifting lizard BITCHES!
#14
Quote by pepsi1187
all i gotta say about underage girls... is you should treat them like square roots, if their under 16.. do them in your head


lol !!!! .. that quote is too funny man .. as for the song .. your nasty
take it easy man .. its just a thread
#15
I assume this is ironic (otherwise it's very disturbing), and if so, it works very well. It's amusing and clever, with good use of rhyming.
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#16
Quote by MetalGS3SE
Idiotic topics like this is why no one respects rap music in the first place.


Rap is awesome. You are not.

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that was a disgrace lol sorry omg i hope you never relay that on human ears ....please


Just for that, I'm going to strive to make this a recording, which will be followed by several remixes.

And no, this isn't autobiographical. It's about a guy in my town who drives around checking out young girls. (He's 33....creepy bastard). I just ran with the idea and tried to make a character.

Thanks to the serious comments, or at least, the ones who actually contributed.
#17
It's written realy well, flows and everything. not realy my style, but I can tell it would be good for people who are into that kinda thing.
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Life is too short to worry about this crap.

Who.

Cares.
#19
Quote by pepsi1187
all i gotta say about underage girls... is you should treat them like square roots, if their under 16.. do them in your head

bo burnham is hilarious.
#20
good stuff dude
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