War for You was alright, the guitars sounded pretty good, but you should try singing or screaming or at least talk in a meter consistent with the song for the the whole thing, because with the normal speaking it just sort of sounds like someone ranting with guitars in the background, it's a good effort, but i think it could use a lot of improvement.

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well ranting with guitars in the background was what i was sort of trying to go for...any one know a good drum tracking program. PS will crit u guys tonight when i have a chance