#1
Hey I just recorded this, its not really a song, more like a bunch of riffs with a solo. First thing Ive ever recorded. Im sure there's mistakes that's which is why i did it, to try and improve. Thanks

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#2
Sounded like it's got some good potential. I liked the riffs quite a bit, just some tightening up in the timing and maybe some double tracking of the riffs down the line & it's gonna be sweet.
I liked how the solo didn't just come in blazing with a ton of notes & you actually gave it room to breath. A few off points in pitch/note choice, but like you said...you're working to get better, so don't sweat it...just keep banging away at it.
You're trying and you're putting yourself out there & that's what counts.
Good job, IMO.


Don
#5
I thought it was some good stuff, and it has some potential if you clean it up a bit, although I'm not sure if all of those riffs would really fit well together. the solo was actually nice and tasteful and your phrasing is pretty good, you didn't try to go super fast and end up sounding sloppy like a lot of people do so kudos for that.

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#7
Honestly my friend made the drums for me, idk how maybe Fruity Loops. But I liked your riffs, very catchy and solo fit very nice sounded really good man.

Thx everyone for the crits
Quote by JMack
i didnt get my first erection until i was 17


Quote by purplmoon
wtf???
the guy sings and also does the guitar solos?? fuck!!
wooooooooooow


My Last.fm