#1
This is a song I made over the course of about 2 days. It's more of a soft song but I used distorted guitar to make it sound more rock like. There may be a few mistakes that I missed but I still really like it overall. Try it out and tell me if you like it. Leave any constructive criticism. Thanks
#2
try this lick to make a song really aggressive

riff 1
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---7/-8----------5/7---------------3/5-----------------------------
--x-/-x-----------x/x---------------x/x------------------------------
---5-/6--0-0----3/5---0-0-0-----1/3----------------------------------------


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-------------------------------------------------------------- riff 2
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---0--0--0--0--0--0--0--0---------------------------------

repeat riff 1

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----8---5---7-------8---7---5---------------------------------------
----x---x----x-------x---x---x-------------------------------------
----6---3---5-------6---5---3--------------------------------------
#3
you have to add more riffs to you songs . i'll try to wright one in the next few days. it will be more of a metal song with single and a lot of multiple notes( i love to play songs like dimond head's am i evil)rock on post a comment on dimebag_d home page

see ya
#5
dimebag_d, there is an EDIT button for a reason. Triple post is a nono.

About your song, I think cymbals earlier on would have done something good for it. Also when your hit this:

e-----
B-----
G-----
D--5--
A--5--
E--4--


replace the 5th fret on the D with the 4th. It's creating too much tension. The rest of the song is good.

Your solo, the shred sweeping does not fit at all. The ending could benefit from a fadeout as well.

7.5/10
Has potential, but needs polishing.