#1
Well, so far it's just an idea.
"Written" and recorded the other day.
Just wondering what you guys thought of the riff and stuff. It's my first attempt at a metal/screamo kinda song, and it's a fair step from my usual recordings of Southern Rock/Progressive Rock, so any crits would be greatly appreciated.
On my profile, under screamo.

-Jayke
Member of the Laney Cult
#3
yeah thats pretty good man although i think its sounds like more rock in some places although thats still cool

i like the big build up thing at like 2:50 and your tone is amazing!