#1
Just an attmept at writing after so long...
Might add if I can get my creative juices flowing.


Caliginous clouds cover the sky.
Arrows rain down upon this once sacred land.
Causing some foes to twist awry,
Falling face first, in the non-fertile sand.
Promises meant a lot back then.
#2
you made me run for a dictionary with Caliginous, Ted.

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#3
I think this is a very good verse and it would be a very good song if you add more to this Keep on Writing
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