K Here is a song i wrote yesterday I would greatlt appreciate any POSITIVE and Constructive comments and criticism. Thanks

The look I see in your eyes,
Makes me wanna spend with you, the rest of my life.
You make every day such a joy.
Where would I be without you?

You make me feel so important,
that I'm your whole world,
Without you I feel so empty,
I need you by my side.

Girl I've been thinking,
Bout how much you mean to me.
You're my entire world,
When you're gone it comes crashing down...
Currently in blues mode.
hello, mustaine34.
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- K.

There's a road that leads to the end of all suffering. You should take it.

- Jericho Caine

secret, aaaaagent maaan.
secret, aaaaagent maaan.