This melodic thing bound with farewell...

War Is Over
(If You Want It)


Accordion Muse S 384-K
wow, this was really really cool. I kinda wanna write something like that now

but the piano chords at the start sounded really dissonant. I don't know what to fix there though. dissonance aside though, the piano parts complimented eachother very nicely. when the guitars came in it was pretty frikken epic. I really like all the parts there. the only problem was that the song ended too fast. I never really felt like anything happened. there was a buildup to something huge that never really came. it just started fading out. I suggest you put more into it, but other than that great inspiring tune.

could you crit the top song in my sig?
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...

...You're still disappointing them...
I'm basically with what Its_Rock77 is saying, especially on the piano part at the beginning