The first half is solid, the back end kind of lost it.
I know the playing was just so-so, but I was looking mostly for criticism on the sound. We didn't do any EQ or mixing, so opinions on which way to go with those would help. I'm a guitarist, not a producer! So now you get to by my producer.

Rhythm: Adam on an Esquire through an EBS Multicomp and a Silverface Bassman 10. Mic is a Sennheiser e609.
Lead: Colin (me!) on a LP straight into a Marshall Studio 15, captured by an audio-technica 5400.