#1
as usual C4C


She gets up to the sound of The Kooks
She likes the bass but looks like The Strokes
She sees the Sun but prefers the sets
Laughs all night, when the TV's off
Ooh laughs all night when the TV's off

Back in her dorm she dreams of Rome
Wondering of swimming birds & why can't they fly
She look swells in her greens & whites
taking photos that shine like the light
Ooh it shine like the light

But there's..
Behind the mirror if you could see clear
you could see her broken smile
an uncertain past that is grey

She said I'm sorry
I'm not that beautiful
She said I'm sorry
I'm not that pretty-ful
She said I'm sorry
I'm not that cute enough
Ooh she said.. She said too much
but I don't care..
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Last edited by rafael90 at Jun 28, 2008,
#2
I really like it, flows really well even though at a first glance it didn't look to me like it would.
The last line though, do you mean "but I don't care?" Because "ain't" doesn't make sense
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#3
broken english there. haha.. thanks. i've edited the last line. anyway, glad you like it
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