I love it, simple but brilliant and it was very easy to follow the lyrics while playing the midi file, I imagined some of the chorus parts would be sort of screamed in an epic Axl Rose/early JBJ kind of way, would I be right?
Nice ob. The lyrics fit really well over the guitar, and I found myself singing them, trying to find the best melody over it. The contrasts in rhythm between the verse and chorus really seem to work, although I'm not the biggest fan of keeping the chord progressions the same for the verse and chorus (even though you changed the D from major to minor.) Thats just a general bias that I have, however. I feel like it makes the song sound too repetitive. Nonetheless, it is a really good chord progression.

Now, just get Axel Rose to sing over it and its all gravy.