#1
I don't really know what genre to classify it as. There is still a few things that need some minor tweaking, and I need to make it longer, but for now, here it is...


UPDATED

version 2:
Attachments:
instrumental.zip
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Last edited by Gyroscope : Tomorrow at 01:00 PM.
Last edited by Gyroscope at Jun 30, 2008,
#3
man i really like the dark sound this piece has and that first solo really screams it.
#4
Everything about this screams awesome.

I love that whole note triplet thing you've got going on in the rhythm.

The first solo just nailed it, the second one was also great, but it didn't quite have the punch of the first one.

Either way, one damn fine piece of music.
#5
Quote by icronic
Everything about this screams awesome.

I love that whole note triplet thing you've got going on in the rhythm.

The first solo just nailed it, the second one was also great, but it didn't quite have the punch of the first one.

Either way, one damn fine piece of music.

Yeah, I was just kind of messing around, and came up with what is now the intro riff. Then added a solo to it, which was when I decided to have it end off the song. The first solo was actually made after the second one. That's why it had more impact.

Anyways, thanks for the crits/comments.
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Last edited by Gyroscope : Tomorrow at 01:00 PM.
Last edited by Gyroscope at Jun 30, 2008,
#6
very good, the whole song had a nice flow. I loved the bridge and how it build up from there to the second solo. both solos were good. Actually I didn't find anything wrong in the song. Great job.

mind critting mine?(new one in sig) thanks.