#1
This song sounds kind of like folk/acoustic, pretty simple. It's at about 100 speed wise. I'm 13, so it's not the best writing, but I think I get my point across.

Intro


Peace and Love (x3)

Every day I see it

Hate and crime and drugs and death

Don't they know

That all you need

Chorus

Is a piece of pie

Tell them it's alright

Just save some room

For peace and love in your life

Intro (x3)

All these people makin' hate and war

Do they even know what they're fighting for

Mr. Lennon said imagine no countries

But you can't get that

From watching TV


So eat your pie

Tell them it's alright

Just save some room

For Peace and Love in your life

Intro (x3)


Bridge

Life can be great

It's not too late

Don't you know that life's a show

So have a go at


Intro (x3)


I'm sure it's nice in outer space

But here on earth

The Human race

Just can't seem to get it right

Why the hell do people fight?


So eat your pie

Tell them it's alright

Just save some room

For peace and love in your life

Intro (x3)
#3
Well...it somehow looks distant...
I hope you get what I mean..
It's not bad though, the writing and flow are nice,
hmm well, I don't know if this advice will help you, and of course it's just a suggestion and you don't have to take it seriously but try writing about subject that's close to your heart.