#1
This is a song by my new band, which is currently a two-piece. It's incomplete so far, we're only about a minute in to our 20-minute masterpiece. It is sung in a variety of forms, including spoken, sing-song and screaming.


Let me tell you a tale,
A tale of the night (night!),
It is quite the interesting tale,
A tale filled with spite (spite!),
It is the tale of a small boy,
Who was a master of the fight (fight!),
This tale of this small boy,
Will surely give you a fright (fright!)

One hundred thousand years ago,
There was an Asian baby born,
He would tear apart the Samurai,
With his elite ninja-storm,

Adopted as a baby,
By the Hitashi-Indian tribe,
He was raised into a man,
But soon he would find,

The wandering Tamagotchi,
Came a’ knockin’ at his door,
To teach him to be a ninja,
Nothing less and nothing more.

They took him to their sacred shrine,
Far from the land of gold and wine,
To a place bequeathed by shadow,
Where he met the ancient master,
The one they call…
JIN LANG HOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

Taught the secrets of ninja-hood,
He had learnt all a ninja could,
But before he could say goodbye,
A man descended from the sky,
And his name was…
WAI YU TAIK MI PAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIII

HERE HE COOOOOOOOOOMESS!!!!
START DUCKING ARROOOOOOOOOWSS!!!!!!
IT'S WAI YU TAIK MI PAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!
AND HIS TEN-THOUSAND SAMURAAAAAAAAAAIIIIII!!!!
Last edited by Ezuma at Jul 15, 2008,
#3
can't wait to hear the song u should definately record it when u guys finish
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#4
sounds badaaz
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#6
Quote by Ezuma
Came a’ knockin’ at his door,


This line was the only one that I wasn't too keen on,
I just don't really think it fits in with the tone of the rest of the poem.
The rest, however, is pretty well written, and I'm impressed with the way you've managed to create this story.
#9
Haha, I'm so glad you bumped this. I love this thing. Has a strong tenacious d feel to it.
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