Hey not bad man, i like these type of tunes, very emotional..
you have defenitly make a song out of it, with a short intro an then the other instruments
that fall in bass en drums.

Thanks for the vote of confidence,i think the band will be really good cuz im going to be playin with alot older people then me at least.

ill go crit yours
Cool man!! Very nice melody and awesome sounding guitar. The lead work was also good. I liked the WAH sound in the second lead alot. However, it might need to be toned down a little. It really depends on the rest of the music when you finally add it.

Very cool stuff.


crit one of these please: