#1
I have a hole in my heart for so long, I've learnt to smile along.
Down on the street it doesn't matter everybody is better than me.
I need my death very soon, very soon.

Mother, mother, mother, I can't let you go, all my life you're haunting me
I love you so. Mother, mother, mother, why do you say, you took care of me as a baby, mother, mother, mother, that's natural you should let me die.
#2
I have a hole in my heart for so long, I've learnt to smile along.

Should be "I've had a hole". This line is good.


Down on the street it doesn't matter everybody is better than me.

Is it "doesn't matter, everybody is better than me.", or "doesn't matter if everybody is better than me."?

I need my death very soon, very soon.

This line could have been better.

Mother, mother, mother, I can't let you go, all my life you're haunting me, I love you so.

"I can't let you go" is a very over-done phrase in lyrics. Think you should write something else here. It gets worse when it ends with "I love you so". Very cliché.

Mother, mother, mother, why do you say, you took care of me as a baby,

I don't even get this part...

Mother, mother, mother, that's natural you should let me die.

...And this makes it even more confusing. Weird ending too.

Sorry, but this was pretty confusing, no phrases of interest and didn't provide much meaning.
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#3
liked the first verse, didn't get the second
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