#1
Here's the song that I wrote about two days ago.. It was about two brothers...Just check it out..

(Verse 1)
We always thought it'd be over
soon enough to start a new life
We've struggled much with those fights
Just think how pathetic they are

(Pre Chorus 1)
Carved our bodies as stairs
We'd be the things you declare
We'd be round or square
Anything you declare

(Chorus)
So what would they say
when blaming is all they could behave?
You're our maker
We're just born to lose your caress
So what would they say
Tell me what would they crave
We've come to grief but never leave
When could we have a relief?

(Verse 2)
We were driven up and taken down
like aeroplanes in our dreaming rooms
We are flowers that are bloomed
For them to flourished on crowns

(Pre Chorus 2)
carved our body as stairs
We'd be the things you declare
Our situations are such despair
And taking us here and there

(Chorus) x 2
So what would they say
when blaming is all they could behave?
You're our maker
We're just born to lose your caress
So what would they say
Tell me what would they crave
We've come to grief but never leave
When could we have a relief?
Last edited by SLAcker_14 at Jun 30, 2008,
#3
Quote by Tenacious D'er
its shares the name of a green day song

+1
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#4
Quote by Tenacious D'er
its shares the name of a green day song


ya rly
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#5
Sorry for the title guyz....I don't mean to copy the title...Actually, the title was given by the my friend from thailand. But some of the songs have same titles man..does it really matter????
Last edited by SLAcker_14 at Jun 30, 2008,
#6
Quote by SLAcker_14
Sorry for the title guyz....I don't mean to copy the title...Actually, the title was given by the my friend from thailand. But some of the songs have same titles man..does it really matter????


Well, unless you become famous within the next 10 years and release this as a single or something, no one will know it's from Greenday. The only reason people are bringing this up is because it's (sort of) recent. Also, it's from the song Jesus of Surburbia, it's a "sub-song" if you will.

I wouldn't worry too much about it, other than the fact that no one will crit your piece, they'll only +1 and "ya rly" that guys comment.
#7
Quote by Tenacious D'er
its shares the name of a green day song




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