#1
I've been loved
thanks to those under the influence
of instinct
and the tainted water of the gene pool
but never liked
sometimes tolerated
like a shitty beer
just drank to get drunk
but running through the sewers in the morning
thanks to public hangovers;
stage fright, I guess
i need to hear some sounds that recognize the pain in me, yeah.
#2
Didn't really flow, had an odd structure. Seems like an interesting subject though. I'm not going to drill you on this, cause it's on the spot, but that's what I saw.