I have redone this song three times. This is my most recent attempt.

What do you think?

Recorded and mixed using SONAR 6/Producer and Sound Forge. I played the guitar (Les Paul Studio w/ GNX4), the drums (TD20/Roland Vpro), and my brother played the bass guitar (Ibanez). I attempted to sing using a Helicon voice processor.

Feedback on the song as well as the mix appreciated. Thanks.