All right, I had some "inspiration" and came up with some basic death metal riffs. I just wanted to see how the structure worked.

R.I.P. Charles Michael "Evil Chuck" Schuldiner
B. May 13 1967 - D. December 13 2001

Quote by eggsandham2
cuz ppl hate how power metal they are cuz they think its "gay" or w.e, which is immature and dirogitory
The first riff doesn't sound right, particularly the last chord. Same with the second. The faster chuggy ones are much better. At least the first one is my favourite. I guess they're pretty cool. They could use some touching up but they're great really, in their own thrashy way. It's just that the lack of drums is pissing me off. The ones at the end are really great.

8/10 on the riffs. Put 'em in a song.

I got a midi for my song if you want to check it out. The link is in my sig. You critted the first bit already I think but It's done now.