#1
I tried to lie but I couldn't find the truth
I Tried to die but I couldn't tie a noose
I'm not so good with the young or with the old
Please help me find my soul

I tried to hide but I got stuck in the clearing
I justified all the voices I was hearing
I almost won the hand but I had to fold
Please help me find my soul

Chorus:
My soul ain't where I left it
She took it and kept it away
I'm beginning to think she burned it
What can I say

I tried to kill but no one was around
I got way to high to see the ground
I heard the roads of heaven are paved with gold
Please help me find my soul

Chorus
Last edited by VegasVendetta at Jul 1, 2008,
#2
I really like it, the first stanza really caught me and made me want to keep going.

I like the way its written, and the chorus is good, the last line kinda bugged me, but i like the point you're trying to get across.

Nice job.

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#5
I was thinking like Em-C-Am-D and then like something different for the chorus, which I guess I need To change any suggestions THX!!!