Well, the accoustic sounds pretty good. However, it's quite hard to understand what you're saying. At times the effects on the vocals are too overbearing. But really thats all in taste and what you're looking for in a sound. It's got a good melody but the timing is off in places. If you have a way to use a click to keep in time, use it. Also, if you don't already have some recording software, pick some up if you can.

Other than that, it's a good start.


Crit one of these, please!!