#1
This is a short song i wrote. This is more of a rough draft and i wanted some opinions on what i have so far. It's sort of a thrashy song with a groove and an acoustic intro.
Attachments:
Short Metal Song.zip
#2
Reminded me alot of Metallica. Except the end, that part kind of ruined it for me. But that's just me.
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#4
oh, i'm loving the intro riff, creepy yet bold

main band's in now, and this sounds like the kind of riffage that has a circle pit or two going along it

short and sweet =D

i think you should add a 2nd guitar, so you can have backing for a solo or something

keep it coming =]

return crit? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=858703
#5
Thanks for the crit' on my acoustic song!
First of all, in the future. Label different parts of the song so that they're easyer to follow...

The begining reminded me a bit of Avenged Sevenfold. Which is cool!

Bar 9 onwards was were the Metallica-ness kicked in. It sounds cool, but maybe some palm mutes and **** thrown in would be cool? The drrums at 14 were too basic Imo, maybe muck around with some cymbals and double kick and shizz? I don't know, it's your song. I can't tell you how to write it.

'22 was a cool riff, nice halftime use of the drums there! The drum fill at 30 was sort of, I don't know it didn't seem to fit. By the way, drums are one of my main instruments so I might go on about them if they don't seem right to me.

44 was one of my favourite parts, the tom's and ****e along with that riff on the guitar. Went really well together!

At 48 it was like a breakdown, which for something that's meant to be thrash, was pretty Metalcore

Overall, good song. Just some stuff I didn't like on the drums.
7/10!
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