#1
C4C

So I wrote this last night. Its pretty rough and I hope to add more too it but I thought I'd put it up and see what people thought. Eventually, I'd like to add another verse with chorus either before or after what I have now. I meant this as a catchy, upbeat song thats just fun to play and fun to sing along to, not something all that deep or poetic. That doesn't mean it has to suck, but if its a little generic or cliche, that's tolerable. Also, any suggestions for a title is welcome.


Untitled

No matter how much
of myself I start to find
I'll strum my guitar
Until I start to shine

And even when
I become a star
I'll think about my friends
near and afar

I'll stand up to the mic
Say this one's for you
You made me who I am
You taught me what to do

Though I've moved on
And I hope you have as well
One day we'll meet again
Have stories we can tell

(prechorus)
But tonight
Celebrate and reflect
The good times that we had
And whatever's coming next

(chorus)
So raise your glasses
Hold them high
Here's to the future
Here's to the ones we left behind
To the future
Here's to the things we left behind
#2
Quote by badgerkid
C4C

So I wrote this last night. Its pretty rough and I hope to add more too it but I thought I'd put it up and see what people thought. Eventually, I'd like to add another verse with chorus either before or after what I have now. I meant this as a catchy, upbeat song thats just fun to play and fun to sing along to, not something all that deep or poetic. That doesn't mean it has to suck, but if its a little generic or cliche, that's tolerable. Also, any suggestions for a title is welcome.


Untitled

No matter how much
of myself I start to find
I'll strum my guitar
Until I start to shine

And even when
I become a star
I'll think about my friends
near and afar

I'll stand up to the mic
Say this one's for you
You made me who I am
You taught me what to do

Though I've moved on
And I hope you have as well
One day we'll meet again
Have stories we can tell

(prechorus)
But tonight
Celebrate and reflect
The good times that we had
And whatever's coming next

(chorus)
So raise your glasses
Hold them high
Here's to the future
Here's to the ones we left behind
To the future
Here's to the things we left behind


the bold part is the only part that i dont like..the echoy thing otherwise rhymes are excellent imo. as for the title..maybe...'left behind' idk