#1
I thought that i could count on you
to always be yourself
But now I see that youve moved on,
youre just like everybody else

We never talk anymore,
we've drifted away
what we once had,
i doubt will ever be the same

But the one person
who i know will always be himself,
has moved away
our friendships been put up on a dusty shelf

If he came back
we could pick up right where we left
Lift our friendship off that shelf
i would no longer be bereft

things would be just like they used to
when life was still worth living
and we would just run right through
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#2
i get no comments :[
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he sure is one legit dude
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#3
Gotta give it more than 16 minutes bro.

I like, had a little trouble, it seems like there is a transistion between talking about a lost love and then a lost friendship. between 2 and 3 verse

Is that right?

other than that, away and same don't really rhyme. I don't have any suggestion, maybe try to work in a away and stray rhmye.
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#4
kk, thanks
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You had to put a penis option.......

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Rust in peace invented food
he sure is one legit dude
don't let it get to your head

ಠ_ಠ