#1
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the second song.
its just a clip

on a scale from 1 to 10 how would you rate....
preformance
quality
the idea for the song.


i always c4c

thanks
tyler


PS if you could change one thing what would it be....
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#2
I would rate it a 10 on an idea scale. It's a good chorus if that's where you plan on using it. I would rate it a 7 on performance. Your vocals are good and have a solid "newer music" sound. However, they go slightly flat in places. But the recording is very dry, so once you start recording it and adding effects it may smooth out a bit.
You guitar playing sounds solid. Nothing negative there. Good melody.

I really liked your 1st song on the list too. A good solid recording there.

Good job! Can't wait to hear it when it's done.

-Wadester

Crit this when you get a chance:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=898572
#3
Quote by wadester
I would rate it a 10 on an idea scale. It's a good chorus if that's where you plan on using it. I would rate it a 7 on performance. Your vocals are good and have a solid "newer music" sound. However, they go slightly flat in places. But the recording is very dry, so once you start recording it and adding effects it may smooth out a bit.
You guitar playing sounds solid. Nothing negative there. Good melody.

I really liked your 1st song on the list too. A good solid recording there.

Good job! Can't wait to hear it when it's done.

-Wadester

Crit this when you get a chance:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=898572



hey thanks man! i was up late last night so i think my vocals did suffer a little bit.
the first one should be done soon as well so yea.
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#4
yea the vocals are defenitly a bit off, im not a vocalist my self, so you get some credit from me, but its a bit flat like the guy said above. Guitar tone and quality is good. Lets hear the whole thing and then i can give you some real crit
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#5
Sounds pretty good. If I could change one thing I would edit the vocals. It's not as horribly flat as I thought it would be after seeing the above posts. Im sure you'll work it out when u do a retake.

The vocals DO sound dry/raw and out of place though compares to the rest of the music. Some reverb and compression can take care of that.

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